Today I focused solely on finishing the last of the web page mockups and I did it! the main problem I tackled was making a few more quick icons and finalizing the copy for the pages. I wanted each paragraph to be succinct. In my mind, they should lead to the next paragraph until you click a button or reach the bottom of the page. This is something that is not currently the case on the current website. So I hope to change that on a few pages at least. I feel very good about it.
I did make a discovery as I was imagining different verbiage and such for each section. While there is definitely a wrong way to do something because you can feel it or see it, I’ve found that there are always multiple ways to write copy correctly and succinctly. I found many as I finally settled on the final words. It seems like a small thing but it opened my mind a bit to words and helped me find what I felt was the best of the right ways. In the spirit of that discovery, I also couldn’t quite settle on one layout for the web page. so I finalized two options.
